[Asrg] Final(?) draft of DNSwL draft
I got some review comments back from the IRTF on the DNSwL draft, so I've
done another version:
http://asrg.sp.am/draft-irtf-asrg-dnsbl-03.txt
Please take a look, if nobody hates it I'll send it off on Monday.
Regards,
John Levine, johnl@iecc.com, Primary Perpetrator of "The Internet for Dummies",
Information Superhighwayman wanna-be, http://www.johnlevine.com, ex-Mayor
"More Wiener schnitzel, please", said Tom, revealingly.
PS: The comments said:
> I have done a review of this document. I think it could use a bit > more attention in section 2.3. This section mentions an > "organization" may use a variety of DNSxLs for different purposes. > I believe this statement can be expanded and made more clear. In > particular, the next sentence discusses "multiple sublists", but no > definition has yet been given for just what that is, and how it > relates to an organization and its variety of DNSxLs. In the next > paragraph it mentions subdomains and sublists. > > I think with another pass on this part {and a definition for the term rDNS > in 2.1} and the doc would be ok.
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