Re: linux-ipsec: args from files

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To: "William Allen Simpson" <wsimpson@greendragon.com> Subject: Re: linux-ipsec: args from files Cc: linux-ipsec@clinet.fi
Date: 07/24/98, 15:37:45

The ipsecure(5) page generally looks ok, but get rid of the #include you have at the SYNOPSIS, it doesn't fit there.

Also, comments should only be started with '#', none of the other characters you mention. I still don't like the use of '#' for hex strings (too easy to confuse it with a comment). How about using '@' instead ?

The reference to photuris(8) should be changed to photurisd(8).

"doing their thing" ? :-)
Probably change it to "[iterate through the rules], taking the appropriate action for each rule."

I'd also change the name of the second field from 'kind' to 'type'

It may make sense to allow the strength to be expressible in decimal (i.e., 128)

Change the name of the <whatever> field to <optfield>

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I think you have more authentication options than are supported by anyone (md5l/sha1l and md5ip/sha1ip ?)
The kp and h variations are sufficient.

In the SEE ALSO section, add vpn(8), photurisd(8), ipsec(4) - -Angelos

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Received on Fri Jul 24 18:10:36 1998