Re: [Design] Raw doc in the policy group files

-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE-----   Mz. Schmeing asked for some feedback on 2.00-notquiteyet doc, here it is:

> Policy Groups are an elegant general mechanism to configure FreeS/WAN

  I would say for ~'maybe' 95% of 'FreeSWAN' 'users'.~ or some such.

> In the 1.x configuration model, in order to build IPsec connections

  I would say ~In previous FreeS/WAN~ and say something about having to do it at each end. Keep it short though, as we can't afford to bore folks, they might switch channels...   I would trim the second sentacne down and just say it was a messy pain.

> By contrast, Policy Groups allow you to set local IPsec policy for

  This is an introductory paragraph, don't get into the minutia of CDIRs and it'd details and the like, simply say something like ~by listing hosts that you want to have special treatment in one of several common~ bla bla bla

> In the next section we describe our five Base Policy Groups, which you

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  This is called a teaser, it makes folks want to watch the next episode of say Fuffy the Verboseness Slayer. So mention here (oddly adding fluff...) that the next section shows how to build a VPN out of OE boxes with ONE line of config on each host or SG.

  Then for your NEXT trick you will... Good luck.

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